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7 things I would take on a airship

First I would take food so I wouldn’t stave

second I would take a pet dragon to fire the enemy’s away

third I would take a invisible cloak so I can hide from anyone

4th I would take a fire proof jacket so any dragons wouldn’t get any fire on me

5th I would take lots of water incase I would be on fire

6th i would take a pillow so I can get a good sleep

7th I would take a blanket so I wouldn’t be cold

 

7 Responses to “7 things I would take on a airship”

  1. Reply
    Anonymous March 18, 2021 at 2:28 pm

    You should check your spelling but else it’s good

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    Anonymous March 18, 2021 at 2:34 pm

    This is a very good piece of writing but i feel you could up level this. For example you could change ‘i would’ as it makes the writing repetitive and kind of dull . You could also upgrade the vocabulary so it sounds enticing for everyone to read.

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    Anonymous March 30, 2021 at 9:36 am

    You should consider adding full stops to the end of your sentences.

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    maiciee March 30, 2021 at 9:40 am

    I like that it is reasonable and realistic but i feel you could change ‘i would’ as it is in every sentence.

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    Anonymous March 30, 2021 at 9:42 am

    this is really good but maybe check your spelling of starve

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    Reagan Draper March 30, 2021 at 9:43 am

    I liked every single idea you chose and my most fave is the dragon.

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    21macl March 30, 2021 at 9:46 am

    i think you should have corrected your spelling your spelling before you posted but other than that it was really good

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