Stormy Night
It was a stormy night as Ty and Mariana explored the abandoned castle. They were terrified as the dim light flickered in the hallway and give them a fright. Soon after, they heard a roar; a dragons roar…
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your story is lovely
i love the way you kind of made it like a sentence in a horror book[:
I like where you describe the lights and
i like that you described the weather a stormy night
i really liked how you left it on a cliffhanger. This is a really amazing story. Well done!
This is a very exited piece of writing. Is there more to come? You could change ‘and give them a fright’ to ‘and gave them a fright.’