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The Greatest Plan Opening Part Two – Landing

Part Two – The Landing

Charles ducked, forgetting all about his laser, thinking he would DIE but Henry got out his gun and shot a few times, only missing once.

Although, The dragon had already mad a big hole an all the air escaped…

“WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” screamed Charles, although the dragon had died.

They fell from so high that when the sky ship hit the ground, through impact, the wood EXPLODED itself.

Henry and Charles fell onto the floor HARD.

“… well that hurt…” groaned Henry.

Just when they decided to look for wood and plastic, without warning, a maroon crystal fell right in front of them.

“What is that!” asked Charles

“I don’t know.” replied Henry.

 

One Response to “The Greatest Plan Opening Part Two – Landing”

  1. What a super active opening! Action well described right from the start.

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