How to look after a three headed fire breathing dog with a scorpion tail
How to pet a three headed fire breathing dog.
Introduction
Mostly three headed dogs guard treasures of great kinds some people even believe they guard the book of Albion. If u would like to pet one of these creatures then u will need a steel three meters tall shed and a fire proof material when u feed this beast u will have to wear a fire proof suit and place three bowls full of dog meat in front.
Appearance
Three headed dogs have thousand of teeth as sharp as knifes which they use to rip apart there prey. They have as small flame that lives in the back of there throat if u have any chance of beating this dog u will have to put the flame out if they haven’t already scorched you to death or poisoned you with there scorpion tail.
To keep this dog company you will need to buy a large rubber football. You may have to earn this dogs trust before you are able too go near it. After you have placed your three headed dogs food down u will have to retreat to safe distance before letting it out for its lunch otherwise it might mistake you for its lunch.
Don’t worry if you follow all these instructions then you should create a bond with your new best friend in no time although some of these creatures do get scared and set fire to anything in sight this is what causes a wild fire.
What happens when the three headed dog thinks that he is being threatened:
When the three headed dog feels that it is threatened well it may scorch everything in sight or maybe even sting you with its scorpion if this ever happens when you feed your dog you must have someone that can call an ambulance.
Well done
1. I love how you came up with the name and showed us a lot of detail.
2. Where did you think of the name.
3. There is no improvement needed because I think its great!!!!!!!!
1) I really like how you went for the unusual instead of just doing a troll, mermaid or dragon. A three headed, fire breathing dog with a scorpion tail is definitely a unique idea.
2) How did you come up with the idea of a three headed, fire breathing dog with a scorpion tail?
3) To make it even better you could change the letter ‘u’ into the word ‘you’ so it then looks more formal.
Great work!
Just remember to use you instead of u in your work.
Hi Levi,
My name is Isla and what really glimmered in the righting was the name it stood out to me and here’s maybe what will help you in your next piece of righting:
1. I loved the name because it stood out I didn’t even need to read the righting because the name said it all so well done for that.
2. Why did you put such a long name?
3. Levi I don’t think I have any improvements for your amazing name so again well done for that.
Ok keep up the good work hope to see more righting from you to comment bye for now…
From Isla.
Thanks the reason that I thought of the the three headed fire breathing dog cause I really like dogs and I thought that there are many treasures guarded by dogs so when I watch mythical stuff I create stuff and I got the Idea of Cerberus the three headed dog ps. Levi
Hi Levi
I love the line three headed dogs have thousands of teeth as sharp as knives.
where did you come up with the title what happens when three headed dogs feel threatened.
I love your work so much i can not find anything to suggest to improve.
From Charlie