sky ship adventure- part 2
As the warm cosy air brushed against her, and sweet sounds of lulling birds sang their song, Emily awoke with a shooting pain through her head and Paelen shaking her.
“Emily lies down you took a nasty blow to the head; oh, I see don’t worry Pegasus is on the deck, there is no way we could fit him down here he is way to big to fit” Paelen grinned a crocked grin as Joel tried to pull his dented metal arm out of the desk.
“You know, Vulcan is going to kill me! Look, my metal arm is dented.”, Wailed Joel.
Back when the three of them were battling the gorgons (because the gorgons wanted to kill Jupiter for killing their beloved sister Medusa) Joel had been turned to stone and he had toppled over, but little did Emily know back then that she could turn him back, but his arm was lost so Vulcan made him the most magnificent arm there ever could be, you could not even see the joints!
“What, where, where are we?” said Emily trying to push back the pain in her head.
“Well judging by the landscape, I guess we are in a desert, but since we were heading south west, we could be in, well no it couldn’t be that so it would have to be, we would have to be in the Nevada desert!
Emily gasped “The Nevada but that’s impossible, we can’t be in the Nevada; I don’t believe it!”
“Well look out the window and there you can see the area 51 CRU facility, and we know the area 51 facility is in the Nevada.”
(the CRU stands for central research unit, they deal with aliens and out of space things, you do not want to mess with them, also they once captured Paelen, Pegasus, Joel and Emily. So, they hate the CRU. )
Joel, Paelen and Emily stepped outside, the scorching sun above them blazed like a wild dancing fire.
“You know, its very hot out here,” exclaimed Paelen.
“You don’t say,” said Joel rather sarcastically.
Pegasus trotted over to them, his muscles were tightened, and his eyes were alert and bright.
Emily stood back and looked up, she could her a something, it sounded a lot like a helicopter.
This is imaginative writing Florence, but maybe try not to include as much speech in the final part. The story is more exciting if you, the author, describe what happens, rather than through what your characters say to each other.