The new crew member…
One scorching hot day, the burning lava sun rose in the air blocking the sight of Jerry’s eyes. They heard something… A twig broke it was loud as a planet crashing in space, they all covered their ears. Someone came out a melted stone house it looked cold they were small… She came out she had red and black clothes on. Why was she red and black was she evil? They thought for a few minutes it felt like an hour than a few minutes. Jerry laughed the captain had gone what could they do? They were wondering if she could be a crew member.. They all shouted so loud she still couldn’t hear they tried ten times. She still didn’t answer then they tried to move the sky ship. It worked they were relieved. We called her and she got on… She sounded a bit suspicious she wouldn’t talk. All she said that her name was Amelia. They were in the sky for hours until a knife appeared out of her pocket a tiny sharp part. She took over diving the sky ship down into the sea.. everyone fell out. They were right she was evil she pulled out a sword on a statue looking like a princess taking off her disguises showing the world who she was. The rusty wet sky ship was in the bright blue waves, in the sea instead of the sky…
very good I liked the phrase of twigs snapping but some lines don’t make sense