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A new friend

​After a while they heard some knock on their door.They didn’t answer they just said “Who is it!?” Then a voice said “ It’s the captin!” Ty and Marine opened the door and Marine said “what happened” with a worried voice The captin said “The sirens made people jump in the water but then a small water dragon scared them off but the dragon won’t leave ships gondola.” Ty and Marine ran to the top deck taking a book about dragons with them. Once they got to the deck they immediately noticed that it was hurt “Ty get the drgon a bandege! QUICK!” Shouted marine Ty, whose feet shivered with excitement, ran to get a bandege while Marine, whose fingers were fliping through the book, fliped through the book until she found the dragon. A couple minutes later Ty returned with a bandege and Marine found out what dragon species it is “The dragon is just a baby and it’s a sea drgon or a blue tailed dragon.” Said Marine. Ty ran up to the dragon and grabed a ball played fetch with the dragon.

One Response to “A new friend”

  1. Some lovely ideas here! I love the creativity and the fact that Ty wants to play fetch with a baby dragon! Perhaps you could reread this through and edit your punctuation (you’ve missed a few capital letters and full stops).

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