StarBlazer
Stargazer
Nigel pulled on the sail, his face getting redder and redder. They were meant to be passing the Plain Lands but the storm had thrown them off track. Kyle, who looked to have been hating it; screamed “SKY DRAGONS EVERYWHERE. WE’RE IN TROUBLE!!!!”. The sky dragons were cyan dragons with machete sharp teeth that could slice through any material with one touch. Before Nigel could say anything, Captain Pablo had yelled “Brace! Brace! Get your heads down” as they dived towards the rocky ground.
Suddenly one of the cyan sky dragons jumped onto the ship and had thrown a lump of fire onto the tea stained map .They were getting faster and faster as they dived to the ground “have we lost anything?” said Captain Pablo, the best captain in the 2nd continent. “Not really. They burnt the tea stained map” . Had they lost them in the mist?.
Suddenly a huge rock emerged from nowhere and the dragon caught it on its back and threw it at them. “The balloon popped!” shouted Nigel to the captain . They were swirling down to the ground, faster and faster, desperately Kyle hit a button and the ship stopped dead and slowly lowered itself towards the ground .
THUMP! The airship crashed heavily on the ragged floor, the people all around shouting in shock. Kyle who was crying in a corner because his teddy got burnt and Nigel who was cheering because he killed one of the dragons but before they could get away the mayor had come out in his pajamas.
The weather was scorching hot like being in an earth-sized oven.
Kyle wandered round and saw ice capped mountains with paint the colour of snow that covered the whole mountain like glue on paper
Beside a lagoon there were majestic sparks that shone in the sky
A black widow hunting for its prey
The time was night ; beautiful stars lit up the sky
A Great start Lewis! Just an idea, maybe you could make the last few sentences a bit longer that’s all. But there are some lovely ideas in there.
Very nice Lewis they amazing and really like your story well done