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sky ship adventure- part 3

“Hay what’s that?” exclaimed Emily, who long silky soft hair waved in her face, as she peered up at the sky. It looked like, a shiny black helicopter.

“Oh, no” whimpered Paelen pushing down the memory of the CRU and how they tortured him.
“HIDE!!!!” yelped Emily as she darted behind a tree, not the best hiding spot, but better than nothing. At that same second Joel and Paelen, leaped into a cactus patch.
Paelen held his breath till he thought that he might pass out, steadily climbing out Joel gazed across the deserted desert, just as Joel stepped out of the cactus patch, Pegasus let out the most ear screeching cry!!!
Suddenly he came crashing through the bushes and trees, he charged towards Joel, just at that moment a gun was pointed at his head.

3 Responses to “sky ship adventure- part 3”

  1. This is a dramatic and exciting paragraph Florence, well done.

  2. well done florence I love how you wrote your part 3 its very descriptive congratss

  3. This is AMAZING Florence! I love the creativity in this piece of writing. can’t wait for part 4!

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