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Sky Ship Adventure Part 3

Chapter 3 

 

Something, or someone, was right behind them.  Tom froze with fear, while Lilly spun round. Lilly stopped. Tom turned round. Only to see a large silhouette looming other them. The small flickering flame, which was left of the candle, reflected in their eyes. The whole world seemed to stop. Lilly asked them who they are and why they were here they stepped back, then reached out, without replying and lit up the torch. Lilly and Tom gasped; it was their Dad. 

Without a second glance the twins rushed forwards. Meeting their freezing cold father with open arms. They paused for a moment, then Tom asked, “How did you get here”? He explained that he had been following them the whole time, just to keep them away from danger, but when the hurricane hit, he lost them…  

Tom hurried out the room to get Dad a blanket, while Lilly questioned him for why he was here. What would the twins tell Captain Alex?... 

2 Responses to “Sky Ship Adventure Part 3”

  1. This is dramatic writing Azura, I especially liked your description of the candlelight.

  2. this is very good Azura, it is very interesting!

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