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A Skyship Adventure Story Part 3

I rapidly spun around and peered into the gloom behind me. It was almost impossible to see but I could just make out the outline of a miniscule pixie curled up in the darkness. I reached out and gently lifted up the child. I lay the sleeping infant’s head on my chest and felt her nestle into me. I  gestured to Max to exit the hole. Once we retreated from the pit I took a closer look at the sleeping baby.

 

She was clothed in a ragged dress and some pea – sized lilac shoes. Her short hair was strawberry blonde and hung limply around her face. I could see scratches covering her body, she needed us to help her. I glanced over to my brother. Max, whose flaming ginger curls danced in the evening breeze, gazed lovingly at the tiny pixie. I could tell he desperately wanted to keep the child so I decided that we could look after her, if only for a few days. “Looks like we have a new crew member,” I announced to Max. He grinned at me excitedly.

2 Responses to “A Skyship Adventure Story Part 3”

  1. Well done Chloe, you have added some details about your characters that create pictures in my mind.

  2. well done Chloe your part 3 is very descriptive and it made me feel like i was there

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