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The sky-ship mission: Part 4.

Just before he saw what it was, a loud bang came from below the deck. Eric quickly pushed open the door and squirmed over to where the noise was happening. “Where were you Eric?” questioned the captain, just managing to steer the wheel. Eric replied with a shrug, he quickly turned away but before he could move, the captain pulled him by his jacket. “Bunk, now.” Eric felt guilty for the baby dragon but there was nothing he could do about it, so, he headed to his bunk with devastation.

Next morning, he was puzzled. No one was in their bunks. All beds were made. Not even dust. He thought he was dreaming, but he was wrong because when he looked at the time it was 11:47am. “I SLEPT PAST MY ALARM!?” Eric shuddered. Eric suddenly pounced out of his bed and scrammed to the room he found the baby dragon. It was gone, all that was left was a huge hole in the wall leading to where the shadow was…

2 Responses to “The sky-ship mission: Part 4.”

  1. This was an amazing story! But what you have done is that there is repetion of Eric, so next story your going to make don’t use a lot of repetion.

  2. your story was absolutely awesome, just you need to go easy on the repetion. Still your story’s really good.

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