you’ve probably been on an airship when you’ve been attacked by a devil dragon I bet you’ve been on holiday on a plane when you’ve been attacked by something you probably won’t believe this but some say there are beasts are up there in the clouds that can tare apart anything that stands in there way.
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Hi Matthew,
1. I loved your piece of writing really fun don’t forget capital letter at the start.
2. maybe you could add paragraphs?
3. Maybe you could improve on putting coma’s and full stops make a list if you want.
Keep writing!
hi my name is India SWW
I liked you Dragan’s name but maybe put some…. that what make this paragraph great and maybe a nether paragraph or two but i like it