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Epidemic airship

Epidemic BattleShip 

 

You’ve probably been on a battleship when the horizon is pink and amber and the breeze just enough to give the engines a boost . Remember how it feels to have the wind blowing through your hair, to see the daisies on the ground  and the modern dull towns.

I bet you’ve enjoyed holiday flights across the great caribbean sea’s and adventures to the top of the ancient mountains , knowing that once you have landed on the deck you will be able to relax for several days (..maybe until your vacation is over…)

But you should also try a vacation when the winter winds are as sharp as chipped glass, with the clouds darkening like the pitch black sky , for that is another matter. When the thunder explodes like the cannon fire around you and a lightning strike would bring the airship down, when the downhaul tension and the ship’s engines delay, that’s when you lose hope and feel empty inside.

As we landed I could see the , alluring view of the poppy fields ; the dark yet terrific clouds ; and the amber sunset.

3 Responses to “Epidemic airship”

  1. Ariela (S) Hallsville March 18, 2021 at 10:21 am

    I really like your vocabulary adjectives of how you described the atmosphere; it made me want to read more. I think this is a really good paragraph but maybe you should extend it because it was quite short but really, well done!

  2. I really love the phrase :
    as we landed I could see the , alluring view of the poppy fields ; the dark yet terrific clouds ; and the amber sunset.
    well done on a terrific job Mariam

  3. Mariam blogging / commenting from school ,Year 5 hallsville Primary School March 18, 2021 at 10:23 am

    Thank you !
    =D

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