My blogging poem
Hold tight! prepare to land! Captain Scott remarked As soon as it landed they immediately jumped out and let a sigh of relief.At first,Dion and Noar were strolling through the countryside having ice-cream until they stumbled upon a burnt-out house,curious to know what was awaiting them they silently tip-toed in.Only to see broken,flickering lights and creaky floorboards.To the left there were broken,bloody shattered photos barely hanging of the ripped-apart wall and to the right there were broken windows and pieces of broken glass on the floor.”Woah this place is weird” whispered Noar
“I know right what kind of creep would choose to live here”replied Noar
” shhh keep it down”
“Ok-ok”
They finally decide to go to the right they peeped round the corner to make sure nothing was there.”Ok the coast is clear”Noar carefully opened the door to see a dirty matress with bugs making themselves at home and a wadrobe on the floor and a broken monitor and just when things couldn’t get much worse a zombie came from under the bed and ate Dion and Noar.
I love the vocabulary you have used Dion !
=D