The ice-cream dragon
Out of the smooth, chocolate-brown egg ,an ice-cream dragon thrust into the sky, dripping with hot fudge and surveying the area with its icy glare. The main feature of the ice cream dragon are its two horns on top of its head, that are actually made of ice cream cones. Amazingly you can tell an ice cream dragons gender by the size of the cherry on the tip of its tail. The minority of ice cream dragons have distinctive markings on their backs that resemble drizzle on an ice cream. Contrary to popular belief ice cream dragons don’t melt in the sun, in fact you can often see them sun bathing on hot days.
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