I want to paint.
I want to paint, a smooth shell of a turtle, shining in the shimmering sun, swimming in th Atlantic Ocean
I want to paint, the sound of the wind on the mountain top, swirling around the sharp bramble.
I want to paint, a dog rubbing it’s back in the mud, getting dirtier and dirtier, as it starts sinking
I want to paint, a sun setting on the horizon, as the trees are waving, knocking people over.
I want to paint, a bee getting pollon from a plant, carrying it on the back legs, taking it back to the bee hive.
I want to paint, a girl reading a book, under a old oak tree, next to the park, full of excited children.
I want to paint,a dancer dancing on a stage,the crowd was cheering and people laughing.
I want to paint,people playing football,on a field,being competitive.
I like your ideas. Next time use ambitious vocabulary.
1. I love that you have used good sentences.
2. Did you enjoy doing this?
3. Make sure you have all your punctuation.