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The angel baby

I want to paint an angel baby beautiful upon the moonlight. A curious owl its big eyes scanning a tree . A star, golden and shimmering granting wishes. The feeling of the cold breeze whistling through the  cold twinkling night . The sound of the Angels singing upon a cloud . The smell of a scented candle, burning inside a house.  The feeling of a pillow comforting a child, the curtains as they sway like a ghost. The memory of before, when she was tucked up into bed. The faint sound of the TV playing, A parent’s favourite movie. The sound of children whispering to sleep .

The angel baby looking

From the sky

Mary

One Response to “The angel baby”

  1. Amelia and kady year 6 Gillibrand primary school June 28, 2021 at 1:19 pm

    1. I like the way you said what the owl was doing and where it was.
    2. How can a curtain sway like a ghost?
    3. You could add more description.

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