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In the room of cake,
we disappeared.
In the room of sweets,
yet agin we disappear.
In the room of salad,
We stayed fourth.
In the room of light,
It was somehow darkness.
In the room of darkness,
it was somehow light.

One Response to “Beau & Ava’s brilliant Blog”

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    Isla Sandness May 3, 2021 at 11:37 am

    Hi Beau and Ava your poem is great! I really like it, there is one thing I think you could perhaps use to make it even better. What I think you might consider is to use different words like on the piece that you said
    In the room of cake,
    we disappeared.
    In the room of sweets,
    yet again we disappear.

    you could say
    In the room of cake,
    we disappeared in the enormous birthday cake.
    In the room of sweets
    we vanished under the mounds of deliciousness.

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