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The room of…

In the room of snakes,

I was jumping around in fear.           

 

In the room of ice,

I was shivering as if I was a snake.

 

In the room of mirrors,

I was confused on where I was.

 

In the room of paper,

I had many paper cuts.

 

2 Responses to “The room of…”

  1. Reply
    eva - rose May 10, 2021 at 9:30 am

    1) i like how you put in the last paragraph i had many paper cuts
    2) why did you write so little in a paragraph?
    3) maybe next time you could write a little bit more

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    Charlotte Hoare May 10, 2021 at 9:34 am

    I like the Ideas, try to make sure it makes scenes.
    Where did you get the idea?
    Once your done read through to make sure it makes done.

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