I’ve never seen i a shark in real life but I have seen two beautiful goldfish.
I’ve never been to the moon but I’ve been to the natural history museum.
I have never had a honking cockatiel but I do have a screeching budgie as a pet.
I’ve never been to Australia but i have been to Yemen.
I have never done sats yet but i have finished this assignment
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This is very good and i like the contrasts in the sentences. On the last sentence I think it needs a full stop . Maybe you could add some more description in sentence four.