The secret libary.
Prologue
Although it looks welcoming, all who go in the secret libary (not so secret) never return. So it is rumoured to be dangerous. Some say that there is a giant spider that is the son of a dragon and a Phoenix but spider venom was put in the egg. That is why it is so dangerous…
Chapter one
It all started with a dare. Volta was up next. He was shaking violently as he waited for his dare. “I dare you…” started Gravolo. “…to go into the secret libary!” He finished. “Oh great.” Volta thought to himself. Slowly, he made his way to the dark tower.
Amazing work
I think you can work on your vocabulary
But you use amazing punctuation