The mysterious Emporium Prologue – Chapter 2
Chapter 2 – Trouble
“Hi, im Old Gleb,” he said, looking Libertina up and down in uncertainty. “I run this shop. Do you like it?” Libertina was just able to squeeze out the word, “Yes.” “Ok well,” he said unsure what to say. Then it hit him. “Feel free to look around and only touch stuff on sale. Don’t touch the book!”
After Libertine saw Old Gleb had gone, she looked at the stuff on sale then at the book and back again…She knew she shouldn’t do it but she could resist. She walked over to the book and dipped the feather into the scarlet ink and began drawing…
She had always longed to see her father again so she began drawing him and her together. She had also always dreamed of beginning in the Blue Haven Resort, and meeting Celia and Sebastian LeFever(The most famous people in the world), she drew them as well and last but not least she drew a dog. She had ALWAYS wanted one but her mother said no, she dreamed about having a white labrador and naming it Luna…
When she finished drawing, she began flicking through the pages to look at what other drawings Old Gleb had done. Each page contained a new idea more bigger than the other. There were pictures of cities,jungles,forests,deserts,islands and more.The next thing she knew, there was a wolf standing right infront of her. It had the same warm,meaty breath she had encountered at the door way. “It was you that had come to visit me at the door, awww how cute.” “Enough,” said the wolf in a deep,dark voice. “No time to waste, follow me…”
Before she knew it, the wolf had taken her to a freshly painted door. Which had a jungle, identical to the one she drew in the book. “Is this my room?” asked Libertina. “Yes it is.” replied the wolf…Libertina opened the door and stepped inside, she didn’t step into a room she stepped into a jungle. The trees were high above her and the frogs’ croaks echoed for miles and miles…Then she saw it. Her dad. It was actually her dad! Immediately, she ran up to him and gave him a big hug. “Who are you?”…
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good job just one thing when you pargrarf do not do 100 spaces gust one or two but every thing else good job
Hi Frankie!
Great great writing today!
Where did you get all the amazing ideas from?
I don’t think there’s anything to improve, well done!
This post is amazing! My favourite bit is the last line – “Who are you?…..” I am very interested to see part 4! You might want to start a new line when the owner starts talking after the main character because it sounds like the main character is talking. What made you come up with the idea of the wolf?