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Chapter 1 the time twister emporium by Chloe H

chapter 1 the time twister emporium

Evelyn  was on her way to the shop to get her mum some medicine and something caught her eye, while she was rushing through the rain. It was a old tall building she haven’t really seen  before and the door was open so she decided to go in because curiosity creeped through her blood. Then she took the first step in.

she stared at all the old antiques cluttered on the floor.like old boxes filled with miscellaneous toys, small soldiers, doll houses with mini animals  and lots more. All these were cool and all but useless and the thing that caught her attention the most was an small brown leather book laying on a glossy brown counter.The book was like a diary full of dreams all the pages moved like they were real. But then a heavy voice shouted “ hay what do you think you doing with that book”

 

One Response to “Chapter 1 the time twister emporium by Chloe H”

  1. Hi! I really like your writing, but there was some sentences that didn’t start with a capital letters. Otherwise great work!

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