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the hop that had a magic portal

The shop that had a magic portal

One day in the little girls bedroom (her name is Lannie) she woke up to a knock at the front door so she got of her bed, put on her slippers and ran down the stairs. When she got to the door there was this person with a sign saying “come to out new highly record supermarket it has loads of things even has loads of things that you think,” she thought for a second so she ran upstairs got herself ready in a beautiful pink and blue dress and then she got into her white sandals then she did her hair. When Lannie was done she hopped out the front door and went along the cobble stone concrete path and went to her scooter and rode to the shop. Once she got there she went inside there beautiful chandeliers hanging from the modern ceiling she was so amazed about it and she saw the toy section se picked up all the toys and teddys she can hold and then she saw a trolley so she got the trolley and put all the toys and teddys in there then she saw a shoe isle and he grabbed two pairs of trainers, 5 pairs of sandals and 3 pairs of school shoes for her future child. After she went to the blanket isle and grabbed 1 blanket then she saw something…

 

Chapter 2 of the shop that had a magic portal!!

When she saw it was A MAGIC PORTAL she was so happy to see it but she went close but.. SHE FELL IN!!!

SHE WAS TUMBLING ROUND AND UND SHE THREW UP!!!!!! She fell back to when she was a baby?? She was so scared and she touched herself as a baby but it took her back to when she was 5 she went to touch her really old scooter then it took her back to the shop.

 

Chapter 3 of the shop that had the magi portal

She was so scared she thought she was Dieng. She nearly fainted because how scared she was she didn’t want to go back in it but the whole shop was… FULL OF PORTALS!!!! So when she walked she went into another portal each time it took her back to romans, Anglo Saxons even dinosaurs. Then the portals disrepaired then she went to checkout and never entered the highly recored /low recored supermarket again! The end.

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