Jim Vs. Bob

Chapter 4 The Return

It was a wonderful house with pink trees and flowers all around you and there was massive stuff Max had never seen before. The door was open so without thinking he went in.His heart was booming up and doon. The house had everything that you might need: a lovely sitting room with a 3-legged cat called Rocky; a large TV; a soft couch; an inside pizza oven; many plates and nice teacups and an old painting. 

Max went up the stairs. It was so dark it was pitch black. Max said “hello?” He thought he was alone then the cat hissed, and he got a fright and jumped out of his skin. Upstairs there was 1 bedroom with 3 beds, and Max heard a noise that was not a hiss. The bed had a long string of hair there was one big bed, one small bed and one medium bed.  

Max had a weird feeling in his belly and a tingle in his big toe.  

Then I heard something doon the stairs it did not sound like footsteps. 

So, I went doon the stairs silently like an ant. 

He peeked through the door; there was a thing… 

There was a strange thing sitting there. It had long claws and huge teeth and a massive body 2 times Max’s size, it saw me, I ran doon to where I saw the door at first. 

“Come back”! hissed the voice. 

             CHAPTER 4 

Max knew the door must have been there, Max hid in a mud pool he held his breath as long as he could. 

He came out the pool and somehow, there was no mud on him, and he was dry as sand and he went through the door. 

The grass was as green as green could be; there was lovely rose Boushes and huge trees.   

There was a lake it was the shape of the door. 

Max expected it to be warm but it like a cold pool. 

Luckily Max was great at swimming, Max was the best in his class, better than anyone even his mum. Max had an epiphany about wat was going to happen next.     

 Max herd something a bit like footsteps cult, stomp, bang, and boom. 

Max hid in the bathroom then he saw a mysterious man with the mask and his one lion cub was shaking his head. 

He said welcome, welcome, welcome hello there I see you came back. 

The man said you can visit many worlds but you cannot undo the past. 

Come again when you want and he opened the door for Max 

Max is epiphany was right but there was one more thing wat that thing looking at me in huge bush.