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The emporium by reece yr6

                                               CHAPTER 1

As patrik walked into the shop of curiosity he saw a bewildering door that looked like dragon skin he opened it to see what was behind it. It was magical he saw a toy pigeon which danced to music.A machine that sucked in clouds to make candy floss. Ancient jewelry from the egyptians.A lego set of Wembley football stadium. Nerf guns which can shoot 1000 bullets. Laptops that are 10x faster. On the counter he found an old looking book.

 

                                                CHAPTER 2

“My name is Mr Thomas” the shop owner said looking at patrik “this is my shop is it good”

“It is wonderful”

“ Thanks, this is my book of wonders. You can look around my shop but don’t touch my book.

 

As Mr Thomas walked away he disappeared in a puff of fire “what did i just see” said Patrik. As patrik walked around the shop he couldn’t resist.

 

Looking up he saw a door leading into a corridor. He was walking down the corridor looking at all the names on the doors. He found the room where he drew the magical jungle; it was just how he drew it. He saw trees with candy floss leaves. There was  a stone path leading to a hefty wooden hut.

 

                                                  CHAPTER 3 

It was an amazing wooden hut with: builder monkeys who were working on the house;ivy climbing the hut. The door was open without wondering, he entered the building it had everything you might need: a lifetime supply of drink and food and a gym.

 

“Hello” said Patrik in a scared voice contemplating if anyone was in But he was met by silence. He wondered into the downstairs bedroom nothing was there he dilly dallied into the gym nothing there he heard claws scratching something he wondered what it was it drew his attention so he went to see what it was so he peeked his head round the kitchen door it was a bear a bear: with ravens wings and lions paws the bear saw him and started to chase him Patrik regretted going into the hut.Patrik tried to escape but he failed 

 

                                                 CHAPTER 4 

Patrik was standing where he thought the door was to the very big corridor but it wasn’t there he saw a river it was very strange the water was purple with fish swimming Patrik got into the river and put his head under the water he saw a weird looking thing.

 

As he was swimming closer to the weird object he thought that it was a desk but he was gasping for air so he had to swim back to the top as he got back to the top he had a second thought was it a desk or a door he swam back down and it was a door.

 

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