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Black hole by tomc

In the land of Neverbelive,I saw a massive mothership leand  and pated an planet.

In the land of Neverbelive, I saw a ruber ran as quick as he can run in the bin.

In the land of Neverbelive, I heard a terifiaying sound king kong  was scriming in pain.

In the land of Neverbelive, came across  Alien’s eating a egle but they can’t.

In the land of Neverbelive, I captured a wall then it ran.

In the land of Neverbelive, I saw a black hole it was on earth.

In the land of Neverbelive, I smelled a bear it was angry.

In the land of Neverbelive, I sang to a book then it came alive then it tried to eat me.

2 Responses to “Black hole by tomc”

  1. I think that your first one is amazing becuse you used a lot allitration in your first one keep up the good work

  2. This is really good!!
    Did you get all of your ideas from your teacher??
    Maybe you could do longer verses next time.
    But your work is so good!

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