Serene poem
I want to paint a serene mountain catching the sun from the air like a hunter catching it’s prey with snow gently settling on the tip of the mountain, slowly dropping down.
I want to paint a memerising pastel rainbow like a splash of colours in the bright sky.
I want to paint my guinea pigs sitting on the lush grass under the lush grass under the warm glow of the shimmering sun beaming down on them while they are resting calmly.
I liked the poem because it has a lot of inspirational words but in the last poem the word lush a little bit too much.
Cool poem please improve paragraph 3.