The Land…
The Land…
In the land of The Nether, the lava pools are like red carpets running towards any soul in their path.
In the land of Sunrise, I saw the blazing sun stealing my eyes away from my body.
In the land of Slither Town, some silky snakes came meandering towards me and stared with a fierce look in their eyes…
In the land of Stone Touch, I felt a smooth piece of marble as large as a cherry tree waving at the icy mountains in the horizon.
In the land of Narnia, I found a forest blanketed in frost while the trees earrings are hanging on to the tree.
In the land of The Parent Agency, I heard a crowd of parents craving to have the child as their son.
In the land of Neverbelieve, I heard a dozen buzzing noises approaching while I was in the exquisite field of dreams.
I think that In the land of The Nether, the lava pools are like red carpets running towards any soul in their path because it has a lot of descriptive vocabulary and similes, do you think so ? To make this even better, you could put even more personification.