I want to paint
The saltey smoth sand ,and the parm trees shaking of coconuts with the shells all over the place.
You can here millions of dolfins schortching, and people drinking coconuts and footprints covord all over the massive rocky seaside.
Crashing waves redy for serfing.
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Great poem I loved the image of the salty smooth sand and what does scorching mean?
I liked the description, but I don’t think you got all the spelling right.