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Wonderland by Katie-Lou

In the land of Neverbelieve, I heard the whistle of a blue *** singing, playing and exploring.7

In the land of Neverbelieve, I saw a gorgeous mountain that was as tall as the glowing night sky looking down towards planet Earth.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I ate the most juicy, ginormous gingerbread man.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I saw the most magical and mythical creature in it’s crystalised cave.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I rode on the most wonderful, magnificent horse named Raven, along the horizon.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I saw the most soft and curious dove flying above the horizon in the hot soaring weather like a cloud drifting into space and speaking to the moon.

In the land of Neverbelieve, there was a mountain that was as tall as the glowing, bright Eifell Tower looking down from the cloouds.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I found a rosy, red, ruby box sat on a white diamond table.

2 Responses to “Wonderland by Katie-Lou”

  1. I think that In the land of Neverbelieve, I rode on the most wonderful, magnificent horse named Raven, along the horizon because I love horses , do you like them? To make this even better you could make your sentences longer.

  2. I think that there was a mountain as tall as the efell tower was good.
    Why did you call it wonderland?
    To make it even better you could use simile.

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