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Night Reflections

Night reflections

I met a man named Moon,
His eyes were crooked craters
Silver tear-tracks streaked across his tired face.
His midnight-black secrets were reflected away
by the surrounding stars
Which shrouded his spiky temper.

3 Responses to “Night Reflections”

  1. I really liked your poem! But why is his face tired? I don’t really have any other comments. I enjoyed reading it.

  2. I LIKE THIS SO MUCH AND QUESTION WHY IS HE TIRED LIKE THE 1ST COMMENT ASKED MAYBE BECAUSE OF IT BEING CALLED MOON AND WHEN MOON COMES ITS NIGHT SO IF YOU STILL AWAKE YOU GET TIRED, SUGGESTION MAKE IT RHYME MORE PLEASE THANK YOU

  3. Really good no improvements that need to be done but why dose he have silver tears?

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