I met a boy named hamster by Rory
I met a boy named hamster
He had legs as strong as metal
And as long as ladders
He wore a brown fury coat
As dark as the night sky
And a red and black scarf
It gleamed as bright as flowers
In the summer
I met a boy named sunny
He had a smile as brighter
Than the sun
He wears a dazzling bright
Yellow coat
When he goes to the beach
He wears of yellow swim shorts
As the sun beams down on him
He gives warm hugs as warm as
Lava erupting from a volcano
I met a boy named Joy
He always runs around like
He’s in the middle of a tiktok
Video
He really enjoyed playing
Football with his friends
Even if the weather was
Soaring hot
He had big bright bulging
Eyes
I met a boy named rainbow
He wore clothes as bright as
A rainbow
He always wore things that
Were colourful
When he ran there was no ending like a rainbow
It’s really good but just add some more detail