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I met a boy named hamster by Rory

I met a boy named hamster

He had legs as strong as metal

And as long as ladders

He wore a brown fury coat

As dark as the night sky

And a red and black scarf

It gleamed as bright as flowers

In the summer

I met a boy named sunny

He had a smile as brighter

Than the sun

He wears a dazzling bright

Yellow coat

When he goes to the beach

He wears of yellow swim shorts

As the sun beams down on him

He gives warm hugs as warm as

Lava erupting from a volcano

I met a boy named Joy

He always runs around like

He’s in the middle of a tiktok

Video

He really enjoyed playing

Football with his friends

Even if the weather was

Soaring hot

He had big bright bulging

Eyes

I met a boy named rainbow

He wore clothes as bright as

A rainbow

He always wore things that

Were colourful

When he ran there was no ending like a rainbow

One Response to “I met a boy named hamster by Rory”

  1. It’s really good but just add some more detail

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