I met a girl called Winter by Lola
I met a man called Jolly.
He wore a big bright yellow T-shirt and had the cheesiest smile I’ve ever seen .
He would do some dazzling dancing and if somebody was feeling down he’d turn their frown upside down.
I met a boy called Google.
He wore a smart tuxedo and carried a big briefcase full of dictionaries, facts, spellings and lots and lots of homework.
He always correcting people .
Getting 10/10 , 50/50, A** and full marks.
I met a woman named dove.
She was as peaceful as a silent walk in the green countryside.
She wore a beautiful white feathered wedding dress.
She hardly spoke a word but if she did her voice would open the gates of heaven.
Great work Lola! I really like the verse about the dove, especially where you said if she spoke she would open the gates of heaven.
If you were to do a fourth verse, who would you meet?
To make this even better, you could try to use some more creative similes.