I really like how you used swimming in the glistening ocean but I would maybe add a bit more onto the sentence.overall this piece of work is very good well done.
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I really like how you used swimming in the glistening ocean but I would maybe add a bit more onto the sentence.overall this piece of work is very good well done.
I like how you have described the present.