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Snow tree

 

Frost Trees

 

Frost Tree are pure white,

Like the colour of the 

Great white sky.

Their leaves an angel white,

With snow all over it

As they slowly went down,

The wind blew and they 

Started to sing a glorious song.

Their trunk is tall as Big Ben,

and strong as steel.

Its roots went deep as the mariana trench,

And if you dug it up you will turn into a 

FROST TREE.

 

2 Responses to “Snow tree”

  1. I really like this idea! And the use of descriptive words for snow and its beauty.
    Big Ben is just the bell so was that a mistake, and mean the tower that holds big ben?
    And I could suggest using some advanced words here and there in your writing, or instead of snow tree have something more intriguing?
    But overall I thought it was nice! keep it up!

  2. I really liked it, especially the twist at the end, I do think you could have added some more detail, but that’s really it! Keep on doing work like this!

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