Breaking News! There is a dragon on the loose snoopping around blowing fire out on to houses in Stone this morrning the neighbour’s saw the dragon blowing fire out of the the mouth on to the house in the village. The fire department don’t have many fire fighters to put out the fire’s so famlies are helping the fire department to put out fire’s in this time.
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Well done Zara! I like how clear the information is within your news report and how you included when and where it happened.
Could you think about where you might be missing a full stop in your first sentence to seperate it into two?
Miss Hall