The Football Unicorn
The football unicorn hovers high above observing all below, the football stadium in Salisbury.
These magical creatures hiding where the rainbow shines and the candy floss clouds ,lay the football unicorn watching .
Seeing is believing.
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You have used alliteration in your writing and you have also included a metaphor to describe the clouds. Next time, add some more description to help the reader create a picture in their mind.