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The Mystery of the Missing Parents

Chapter 2

On there way to the haunted house, Lilly and Leo took a little break on the park nearby.

As they sat down on the bench, Leo saw the swings swinging by them self.

“Err, Lilly look at the swings the – there moving!!!!”

Lilly looked at the swings she was confused. The swings weren’t swinging, so Lilly decided to go over there and take a little swing.Suddenly, Lilly felt someone pushing her. She was going higher and higher.

“LEO HELP,  HELP I CANT GET DOWN!” Lilly screamed in horror.

Leo ran to help her, “ quick we have to go we need to find your parents and get away from this horror. “

A few minutes later, They found that they are  at the haunted house. They both went up to the door and entered the house. Lilly went up stairs and Leo went towards the kitchen. Lilly went to  the master bedroom and saw the mirror on the dressing table. It was smashed. Lilly called Leo up stairs. Lilly and Leo than heard doming in the other bedroom.Lilly and her friend went to that bedroom. “Mum! Dad!” Mrs and Mr Dornan how are you. Lilly and Leo explained what happen and when it happened. Lilly’s parents walked out of the room and then left the house.

2 Responses to “The Mystery of the Missing Parents”

  1. I liked the title for it, it made me want to read on.I think you could add more excitement in the punctuation.Why did you put capital letters for Leo help ,help I can’t get down.You could be more created and not use Leo,Lilly,Mum,Dad,Mr Dornan and Mrs Dornan.

  2. Next time try to stay in past tense because you used they found that they are instead of were. Maddy shcp

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