Daniel was so exited because we had just got a new puppy also this was the first time I was taking it to the beach. When they arrived Daniel sprinted towards the beach as I carried my puppy (Bessy).  

He let Bessy play as I munched on my hot dog. Suddenly there was a huge blast of wind Bessy stared growling. Bessy ran…there was a colossal, towering shadow towered over Daniel as… “ahhh!” Screamed Daniel From out of the the water was a horrible monster with bright orange eyes, appeared. Bessy and Daniel sprinted back home as the stumbled a few times. That was the end of Daniel going to the beach.

No comments yet.

Please leave a comment. Remember, say something positive; ask a question; suggest an improvement.

%d bloggers like this: