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The Journey-part 3

The Journey- part 3  by Odey

The creature finally rose up from the murky sand, and was crawling up to Go.Go launched himself backwards sprinting as fast as he can to the ship to find some protection. Gon lifted himself himself slightly off the ground, so that the creature couldn’t reach him. Gon could just make out what the creature was. “It’s a velociraptor” “and it’s hurt” called Gon. Go came out of his hiding spot holding a sword and shield. “It must have got hurt in the storm”replied Go.

The velociraptor was shivering with terror and limping. Gon dashed off to get a cup of water and a blanket, wondering whether it would make it.

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