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Chapter two by ronan

Chapter 2

“Shhhhhhhhh.” Said the person. They gaised at each over . It was a man . They were very confused. Mark had a brother called harry. Harry screamed when he saw the man. Mark put his hand on Harry’s mouth. “Shut up, mum will kill us.” The man was very scary. They were wondering in there mind why is he here, how did he get here. They were very confused. All they could do now is ask questions. “How did you get here”?

The man was so bored from saying this . “Alright you need to stop asking. You have been evacuated to your new mom have you”? We both nodded our head. He was so sorry for there loss. They were bowing there heads with sadness. 

They were now getting ready for school as the man took them. There mum was very lasy and was asleep in bed. Today at school they learned art . The did pictures of the Mona Lisa. Mike was first harry was seconded and happy jack was 3rd.We cheered together as we won medals. Lisa was so jealous that she kicked me and called me lasy maisy mark. We then got home and the man was gone.

One Response to “Chapter two by ronan”

  1. I like it because it has detail.
    Why did he get his brother?
    He could use a scream at first.

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