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The lovely Animals

The Lovely Animals

I want to paint a brave bee flying over a bright city.

I want to paint a handsome hedgehog walking in a dark and lonely town.

I want to paint a lovely spider climbing up his sticky and gleaming web to catch his prey.

I want to paint an odd octopus swimming through fancy fish.

I want to paint a giant panda chomping his juicy bamboo.

I want to paint an enormous elephant and his terrific trunk.

I want to paint this amazing poem.

 

Aged 8

Oyne Primary School.

One Response to “The lovely Animals”

  1. Wow, Matthew! What a great first poem. Love the alliteration. Next time, you could add some similes. Well done!

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