The lovely Animals
The Lovely Animals
I want to paint a brave bee flying over a bright city.
I want to paint a handsome hedgehog walking in a dark and lonely town.
I want to paint a lovely spider climbing up his sticky and gleaming web to catch his prey.
I want to paint an odd octopus swimming through fancy fish.
I want to paint a giant panda chomping his juicy bamboo.
I want to paint an enormous elephant and his terrific trunk.
I want to paint this amazing poem.
Aged 8
Oyne Primary School.
Wow, Matthew! What a great first poem. Love the alliteration. Next time, you could add some similes. Well done!