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CHAPTER 1 The warren attack

As the children see their fellow friends get attacked by the Gorm.Aunt soulin is taking Sidkin,Spaz and Sue upstairs while they hear swords clashing and chaos happening.Then Aunt Soulin shoved them into the room and they were frightened.They were crying of fear. Sidkin shouted”why did you bring us in a bedroom is not much safer?Anyway mum and dad are dying”Shouldn’t we help our friends and family?

 

Then Aunt soulin was looking under beds,sofas,even the desk.She couldn’t find the thing.It was special so they have to take it otherwise the Gorm will take it and do some demon things to it.Then kill the world.Spaz questioned” what are you looking for?We can help”Then she found it.It was a diamond dagger.Also she gave them a map of the tunnel.

 

They were arguing with aunt soulin because they didn’t want to go.They think their older enough to protect their home.Then aunt Soulin yelled”he’s too aggressive for you” Then you could hear Sue crying not knowing what to do.Then they heard a terrifying noise of footsteps.He was stomping on the stairs.Aunt soulin screamed” run GO GO he’s killed them all run for your life.

 

Then they took a deep breath and went inside of the tunnel of nothingness.They desperately wanted to stay. Then of they went carrying Sue. When they got inside they were fighting who’s going to read the map. Then they settled down and then they let Sidkin read it.Then all of a sudden, They stumbled on something.They thought it looked like a chest.Then they took a closer look . There was a pile of clothes, blankets and pillows.

 

Suddenly,they got lost so they handed Spaz the map.They were trying to find the way.But they felt like they travelled 40 miles. They’re struggling alot.They should have let Spaz take it at first.

 

Suddenly,Their legs started to feel numb which is unfortunate because they just found where they were. Suddenly they collapsed… They are safe for now!

                    

 

Chapter 2 the journey to a warren

Sidkin woke up and heard the noise of iron scraping together.He woke the others up and they were frightened.They grabbed their luggage and ran as fast as cheetahs.They turned a corner and saw a glimpse of light .They could hear him riding his giant rats ,getting closer.

 

The sun was blinding them. Sue questioned.“Do you think the gorm is lost?”Spaz looked behind and could only see dust.They were out and then the tunnel collapsed and chopped Sidkins ear off.The first thing they saw was a bright clear river flowing smoothly.Then noticed a crow with a deep stare.

 

Spaz carried on walking . The children were following the stream to see where they would end up.They got to a dead end so they had two options. To go through the deep dark woods or swim across.They can’t swim and are super scared of the dark.Then Sidkin had a plan to get logs and build a bridge. Sue was still *********** made it and ran across.In the distance  Spaz saw the top of a warren. They were running and being as brave as they could.Then the children went into a deep gloomy forest.

 

Sue could hear Christmas carols. Sidkin-the dumbest-said lets go inside.The others said it was a bad idea.Then Sidkin sprung inside .The others followed and went straight to the crackling fire.They had goose bumps.The rabbits stopped singing.So the children turned around.Then had knives to the face. 

    

 

Chapter 3 The  attack

 

Inside the warren, they were saying we live only 1 mile away.We don’t work with the gorm we promise. Suddenly, Spaz saw something! She was worried.She was trying to communicate with Sidkin while he had a riot with them. Then they heard an iron bar fall.Like ants in their pants, they started running around. Guards were shouting close the gates.

 

The children ran as fast as lightning flashing but they were horrified.The muscular gorm was chasing them.Then everyone shouted slide under the gate.

 

Suddenly,Podkin nearly had his other ear cut off. They ran down the spooky, haunted tunnel. Once they were outside of the tunnel.

They were free and could hear the horrifying noise of rabbits dying.Also the squelch of a knife going into their guts.

The children could hear the gorm striking at the gates.Outside the warren, they darted through the woods.

 

Suddenly, they heard the creepy footsteps come from every direction.The children couldn’t escape. Then they got grabbed by the gorm leader(ramashak).They got chucked in a cart with metal bars at the back.Then the path changed and went straight down. It was to hell where the devil lives-the gorm-.They were in  a cage.

 

Chapter 4 the great escape

While they were in a cage the children were  bored to death and weary. They had a soldier guarding them.Every time the children went to sleep they would get poked.They saw millions of rabbits.Also Sue saw a whole town full of Gorms.

 

Suddenly, they heard animals like:moles,rabbits and even ants.Spaz was desperate to get out of there.Then they remembered something. They have the magical dagger. So they cut through and were ready for war.

 

Then instead Sidkin saw a hole so they headed to it. Suddenly, The children hopped on cages and crawled up a hole. Meanwhile, the children ran the animals flooded hell.

 

Sue questioned “ why is there a pegasus “?They hopped on and flew to a towering height. But they could still hear metal bars drop.

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