through the magical door
- I used good opposites.
- I used great punctuation.
- I will try to do more simile.
Through the pink door
There is a box of chocolate,
A milk shake waiting to be drank
And candy floss burning…
Through the red door
I found soup burning to its death,
A red pepper burning to ice
And fire cooking thunder.
Through the yellow door
I found the sun shining through the
A banana relaxing at the pool,
A flower dancing on the rocks,
A yellow pepper jumping into warm water.
Through the blue door
I saw water making a balloon,
A ice cube doing a front flip,
Blue paint splatting on a sponge,
a rangers t-shirt put on a monkey…
Through the green door
I found a sprout flying in the sky,
A cucumber wiggling like a hot dog,
A sauce pan cooking leaves
And grass sitting on a rabbit…
Through the black door
I found a sunset crying for darkness,
A pencil poking you upside down,
A paint brush painting the room of darkness
And ooze dripping from the stairs.
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