3:00am
My eyes opened. I was in my bedroom. It was 3:00am and my mouth was very dry so I decided to go to the bathroom sink and get a drink from there. Sip, Sip, Sip. The water was so hot that it burnt my tongue. I ran to the kitchen to get some milk to cool off my tongue but to my surprise there was a goblin drinking all my milk. I Said “What are you doing drinking all my milk?”
“My mouth got burnt by a dragon.” said the goblin.
“My mouth got burnt too.” i Said.
I like the way the goblin has a story to tell.
Why was the water hot?
Check your punctuation at the end of speech.