Axolotls
Quiet-hunter Meat-eater why do you bring home little, convey more try harder to feed the Harmen?
Axolotls Axolotls why stay, Go and explore in that world of ours?
Axolotls Axolotls why be cautious when you can heal your own body when you hunt for your food?
Quiet-hunter Meat-eater Young- carer Family-hunter, Worm-killer Friend-defender child-teacher. Acting immortal Being the king of amphibians.
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Hi Ralph! I really liked your poem about Axolotls. I especially liked the line “Acting immortal, Being the king of amphibians.” It’s a great way to describe the unique abilities of Axolotls. To improve your poem, I would suggest adding some more description of the Axolotls to help the reader better imagine what they look like and what they do. For example, you could describe their appearance or describe how they hunt for food.
My question for you is, have you ever seen an Axolotl in real life? If so, what did you think of them?