Crocodile, Crocodile,
Why do you swim in murky water?
When do you rest in the red hot sunshine?
Crocodile, Crocodile,
Who let you feast on the animals that dare to drink in the dark water?
Which animal is your favourite to feed on?
Crocodile, Crocodile,
Why are you not unique and shy?
Can you fit under a fallen tree in the river?
Who let you be so sly?
Crocodile, Crocodile,
How much energy do you have?
Do you sleep at night or day?
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I like how the author describes the crocodile’s habitat and behavior, like swimming in murky water and resting in the sunshine.
To improve, the author could add more description and make the sentences longer to give more detail.
A question for the author could be: Can you describe the difference between the crocodile’s behavior when it is hunting compared to when it is resting?