Dog, Dog
Dog, Dog,
Why do you bark until the morning ceases it’s end?
Dog, Dog,
how did you get such silky fur?
Dog, Dog,
What did you do to get such soft, shiny ears?
Dog, Dog,
Who gave you such thick claws?
Dog, Dog,
When did you finally get such sharp fangs?
I like how the poem is asking questions about the dog’s physical features. It shows the author is curious and interested in the dog.
One thing that could be improved is to add more description and details to the questions to make the poem more imaginative and engaging for the reader.
For the author: Have you ever noticed anything else about the dog that you find interesting or unique?
Thank you very much. I am the author. 😀